This is my first draft of my game. It is about overcoming depression for a refugee.
The first draft of the game
And So It Was Written
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This is an OK start. You made most scenarios shorter but sime parts are still way too long and disconnected, and the storyline does not teach about overcoming depression. The choices and scenarios are not yet mature enough to teach the player anything, you know?